I actually really liked this one. I think you lost a bit towards the ends when things got abstract, but I overall great. A re-read is gonna help clear things up on this on for sure. Depression and can rob us of so much. Make us feel less than human.
I wasn't expecting another novel from you, and of course I liked it. Your way of conveying meaning through sketch-like images is delightful. The music conveys the unnaturalness and tension of the main character's situation. The world is unpleasant, incomprehensible, and repulsive. It's a pity that the ending wasn't shown, but I hope this means that you will reveal more about the world and the main character's problem. Don't give up and finish this story and “losing ground”. I also wanted to ask if it's possible to translate both this game and that one?
This landed on me particularly hard. I just ended a years long relationship with someone after realizing the whole thing was "fake" and I'm still reeling from it so it is hard not to find parallels in every scene here. I'm very excited to see more of this if you continue!
Oh, I thought there was more since when I downloaded it it read prototype. Was kinda hoping for the very uncomfortable talk at the hospital between the two. But darn, oh well, really enjoyed it regardless!
I enjoyed it so much I even talked about it with my dad.
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Pls Make it android :'c
This VN IS ABSOLUTELY PEAK. But... I'm still confused about the ending... I need some explanation for the ending.
wow, what an awesomely melancholy vibe you've crafted. I really like the lighting work as well!
Man those robot deers are stacking up.
(Joke comment)
I actually really liked this one. I think you lost a bit towards the ends when things got abstract, but I overall great. A re-read is gonna help clear things up on this on for sure. Depression and can rob us of so much. Make us feel less than human.
Grim and gripping. A great read.
damn
I wasn't expecting another novel from you, and of course I liked it. Your way of conveying meaning through sketch-like images is delightful. The music conveys the unnaturalness and tension of the main character's situation. The world is unpleasant, incomprehensible, and repulsive. It's a pity that the ending wasn't shown, but I hope this means that you will reveal more about the world and the main character's problem. Don't give up and finish this story and “losing ground”. I also wanted to ask if it's possible to translate both this game and that one?
This landed on me particularly hard. I just ended a years long relationship with someone after realizing the whole thing was "fake" and I'm still reeling from it so it is hard not to find parallels in every scene here. I'm very excited to see more of this if you continue!
that was the end
Oh, I thought there was more since when I downloaded it it read prototype. Was kinda hoping for the very uncomfortable talk at the hospital between the two. But darn, oh well, really enjoyed it regardless!
I enjoyed it so much I even talked about it with my dad.
yes, I forgot to relabel it as released when I published the page
I NEED CLOSURE AHHHHHHHH, great experience!!!!
Also, what's the track list order of the game I want to make a cd for it to keep! :3c
https://youtube.com/playlist?list=PL5tPq9rSciUcmsY0F0gjjHy5QXUYdSl3X&si=iShct1T7...
here ya go
I both hate and love that ending.